Describe a time you were sleepy but had to stay awake
You should say:
When it was
Why you had to stay awake
How you kept yourself awake
And explain how you felt about it.
I'm going to tell you about a time when I was really tired yet needed to stay up.
It was a crucial test since it enabled me to graduate from high school and gain admission to university. I spent a lot of time studying for this exam, yet I was still worried and stressed about it.
I decided to double-check it the night before that. I felt dizzy after 3 hours of studying, so I took a brief break to spray water on my face and do some easy exercises like twisting my neck and arms. I also grabbed a glass of cold water, and I had to admit that everything worked well right away.
To be honest, I couldn't keep my attention for more than an hour. My eyes were tired, and I thought I should go to bed as soon as possible since I could wake up late the next morning.
Fortunately, I had an excellent score of 8.8 for math that day
- In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this 78
- Many people nowsadays travel abroad for their university education. Why do people do this and would/ will you consider doing this yourself?Give the reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience. 56
- As computers are being used more and more in education there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- All children should be made to wear school uniform To what extent do you agree approve of or disagree 78
- Some people believe that schoolchildren should do their class work individually Other people believe that sometimes class works should be done in small groups 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 3, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Im going to tell you about a time when I w...
^^
Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... double-check it the night before that. I felt dizzy after 3 hours of studying, s...
^
Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ercises like twisting my neck and arms. I also grabbed a glass of cold water, and...
^
Line 4, column 17, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...orked well right away. To be honest, I couldnt keep my attention for more than an hour...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, really, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 672.0 1615.20841683 42% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 166.0 315.596192385 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.04819277108 5.12529762239 79% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31410783653 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.698795180723 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 506.74238477 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5557717242 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.6666666667 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144463071089 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513757424482 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739200679454 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817862965121 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865025315392 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 13.0946893788 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 50.2224549098 156% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.21 12.4159519038 50% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 78.4519038076 33% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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