The key solution for the environmental issues is for the current generations to live a less comfortable life to benefit future generations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Environmental issues play a harmful role in a modern life. Naturally, environmental issues have a powerful influence on the way we live and its impact is often negative. Although we might not like to admit it, environmental issues have created certain unpleasant consequences to humans. The present essay aims to discuss that environmental issues are devastated for at least three main reasons
First and foremost, environmental issues can be very damaging to those people who care about their health. For one thing,many scientists strongly believe that some pollution is causing unbelievable illnesses for all of the people from different ages. For instance, current data indicates that the number of people who live in big polluted cities suffer from asthma has increased dramatically. Another thing is that technology helps people in this way.
People can use renewable resources with their knowledge to live better , more easier and healthier. As an illustration, developed countries are able to use wind turbines for generating electricity so that the percentage of some sicknesses which are related to air and nuclear pollution have decreased significantly.
Second,it is generally admitted that environmental issues can damage resources for new generations. In the first place ,global warming causes some natural disasters which can have harmful effects on agricultural and soil. An example may help clarify the point. Unfortunately, people have cut many trees and removed many forests from some years to build factories, roads and farmlands which lead toward natural disasters like flood. Actually it has important role in food resources specially for new generations. The second place, we often hear and read about controversial issues concerning non renewable energy which people are using it more than normal . All in all,environmental issues effect much more than we think they do.
The last but not least,environmental issues damage people 's lives. Professor Smith the head of Ecology department at Berlin university asserts that environmental issues is the most worst problem at the present time which can cause new generations to have problems in future. In 1990, in Japan, deforestation forced people to migrate to neighbour countries because they couldn't access to any foods or get a job. The latest figures released by World Health Organization (W.H.O) reflects that 78 percent of people are forced to leave their homes because of difficult conditions . In other words, people and governments should take effective measures to eliminate the problem of environmental issues by protecting environment and make a safer place for the new generations.
To sum up, environmental issues are determined for at least three main reasons. However, the crucial question is that can we really solve the problem of environmental issues of the new generations? Only time will tell,but in the meantime,environmental issues influence every aspect of every day lives.
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- People s shopping habits depend more on the age group that they belong to than any other factor 61
- The graph below compares figures for the production and consumption of energy in the US from 1950 to 2000 It also predicts figures for 2025 59
- The key solution for the environmental issues is for the current generations to live a less comfortable life to benefit future generations To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- People s shopping habits depend more on the age group that they belong to than any other factor 61
- The graph below compares figures for the production and consumption of energy in the US from 1950 to 2000 It also predicts figures for 2025 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, may, really, second, so, another thing, at least, for instance, for one thing, in other words, to sum up, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2510.0 1615.20841683 155% => OK
No of words: 458.0 315.596192385 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48034934498 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14388028237 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 176.041082164 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569868995633 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 790.2 506.74238477 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1158644378 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.583333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0833333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218368116997 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068687926452 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493270050485 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127578026368 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345549428624 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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