An interesting place (village/city...) you have been to
Travelling has always been one of my favorite activities. By the time I was 18, I had a chance to go to Da Lat city after I had finished my National high school exam. I had never traveled before, so this is one of my meaningful trips.
Before 3 months of the exam, my parents told that they were going to take a trip to go to wherever I wish. I had been thinking for a whole month about some famous places in Vietnam, they consisted of: Ha Noi, Hoi An, Da Nang,… but I chose Da Lat in the end because our trip was booked in November, this is the wonderful time to go there.
Fortunately, I completed the final exam of my high school-time pretty well, so I started my trip at the comfortable psychology. We booked the first flight in November to Da Lat. It was a completely different place than where I have lived for so far. The weather was pretty cool there; therefore, I got a sore throat after a day in Da Lat.
Came to Da Lat, I took lots of pictures with wild sunflowers spreading along the hills. I spent a day to explore some famous locations in order to take pictures, I really like the cozy atmosphere and the layout of homestay or coffee or tea shops here which give myself the feeling of comfort and closeness. The next day, I enjoyed many well-known dishes here, like: Da Lat beef hot-pot, steamed rice rolls with chicken, Da Lat grilled meat rolls,… Those dishes are so delicious that I can not forget. The people are friendly and the place is exquisitely beautiful with churches and wooden houses, mountain rivers, beautiful lush forests and train stations.
Da Lat is a beautiful place that people need to visit at least once. If I have a chance, I will comeback to Da Lat to enjoy the wonderful time and explore some new locations there.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 214, Rule ID: THE_PUNCT[1]
Message: Did you forget something after 'An'?
...Vietnam, they consisted of: Ha Noi, Hoi An, Da Nang,… but I chose Da Lat in the end...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...ey consisted of: Ha Noi, Hoi An, Da Nang,… but I chose Da Lat in the end because o...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
... with chicken, Da Lat grilled meat rolls,… Those dishes are so delicious that I ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, so, therefore, well, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 937.175257732 146% => OK
No of words: 312.0 206.0 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39102564103 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52762514802 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 127.690721649 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 290.88556701 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.4843792267 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3333333333 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53333333333 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0946533426774 0.216113520407 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393789450173 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493988583357 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0624390308171 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323132052268 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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