The breakthroughs in medical science are by far the most significant advances in world society over the last two centuries.
Discuss this statement and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
In recent times, the steps of science-technology have made a crucial contribution to the development of society. Although there is a school of thought that the significant marches of medical science might be considered the pinnacle of human life about two hundred years, I hold an opposite opinion that those breakthroughs could contain some drawbacks towards human beings.
Without any doubt, a series of fatal/dangerous/serious diseases have been prevented, completely wiped out in the flow of history. For example, humans are likely to curb tuberculosis, which used to take many people around the world for centuries. Thanks to medical breakthroughs, the average human life expectancy might be remarkably increased. When it comes to modern medical interventions, people tend to get better treatment and faster recovery than traditional methods like curing by herbs or acupuncture. Therefore, there is no denying the advantages that medical marches have brought.
On the other hand, medical advances might also lead to thousands of negative aspects. It is also said that the more people develop medical science, the less humane people, due to ethical beliefs. Many animals like mice, rabbits would be used to test not only on painful medical treatments but also on new medicines. Furthermore, the medical developments might lead to biological warfare that would no longer threaten all human races. If the authorities of the developed nations implement medical science to launch meaningless wars, they will end human history.
In conclusion, medical science would play a crucial role in human development in the community. If the applications in medical science are not implemented for malicious/evil purposes, their use will make people's lives more prosperous.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52398523985 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1911672941 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634686346863 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9824359002 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.928571429 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108852427221 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397840275813 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0219562943022 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737813794096 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.013117841461 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.