Many people join distance-learning programmes (study material, post, TV, Internet) and study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefit as attending colleges or universities does. Do you agree or disagree?
Thanks to the internet's worldwide coverage, we are able to do many things easier than before. These can be exemplified through distance education. Although many people argue that online courses cannot be as effective as going to teaching centers. Yet like a coin has two sides, everything has its pros and cons. And I think in this case the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
There are many reasons why e-learning is better than the traditional ways of studying. Firstly, online education allows you to use time more freely and wisely, all it needs is a good internet connection. Contrary to colleges or universities, you have to go to the facilities on a fixed schedule that may sometimes interrupt your work. Secondly, online courses are always cheaper than going to normal classes. Since there are no facilities fees thus the costs are cut down significantly. Furthermore, it is more convenient to stay at home and study online. Because universities and colleges have a tendency to be very far away from the urban area. So if we can learn at home, so much time and money for transportations will be saved.
Nonetheless, everything has its own downfall. Studying online is very convenient, yet the effectiveness of the lesson is dependent on learners. Since they do not have anyone to compare if they fall behind everyone or not. Students have to always work hard all the time. But comfort is one of many hard obstacles to pass. As you are learning at home, the surrounding environment does not design to be an education space like a class. Therefore, much clutter will appear, distract and make you sluggish.
In conclusion, if we can surpass all the obstacles, then I believe that merits will exceed demerits. Therefore, I do not accept the opinion mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...exemplified through distance education. Although many people argue that online courses c...
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Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s cheaper than going to normal classes. Since there are no facilities fees thus the c...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97324414716 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88832343709 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61872909699 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.8984463005 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.5909090909 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5909090909 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.59090909091 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199217867025 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466536673966 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418366561689 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102814941405 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047652580981 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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