The table below highlight data on the number of travellers using three major British airports between 1998 and 2003.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , over
...the Uk through three particular airports,over a five-year period between 1998 and 200...
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Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Overall
... five-year period between 1998 and 2003.Overall,what stands out from the graph is that ...
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Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , what
...ear period between 1998 and 2003.Overall,what stands out from the graph is that there...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 254, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , while
...n in the number of visitors via Heathrow,while the figures for Gatwick and Stansted wi...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 23, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... upward trend. Looking at the details,the number of people who travel via Heathro...
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Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...tarted at 27,2 million in the first year,and then the figure rose significantly,to r...
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Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , to
...r,and then the figure rose significantly,to reach the highest point of 48,2 mln in ...
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Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Despite
...h the highest point of 48,2 mln in 2000.Despite falling considerably in 2002,the trend...
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Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mln in 2000.Despite falling considerably in 2002,the trend finished at 45,6 mln i...
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Line 5, column 27, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...last year. As regards Gatwick airport,the figure showed a considerable growth fro...
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Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: After
...5 mln to 51,1 mln between 1998 and 2002.After that,there was a sharp increase to 69,3...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...1,1 mln between 1998 and 2002.After that,there was a sharp increase to 69,3 mln in 200...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...r of passengers during the whole period.The number of passengers at Stansted was in...
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Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...gers at Stansted was in a similar trend.The number began at the lowest point of 17,...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, then, while, as regards
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1843575419 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12273012972 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614525139665 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 22.4926829268 262% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.6524152243 43.030603864 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 309.333333333 112.824112599 274% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.6666666667 22.9334400587 260% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.3333333333 5.23603664747 255% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154003142831 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108565812512 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563514907179 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108565812512 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563514907179 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.8 13.2329268293 248% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 61.2550243902 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.9 10.3012195122 232% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.36 8.06136585366 129% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.9970731707 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , over
...the Uk through three particular airports,over a five-year period between 1998 and 200...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Overall
... five-year period between 1998 and 2003.Overall,what stands out from the graph is that ...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , what
...ear period between 1998 and 2003.Overall,what stands out from the graph is that there...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 254, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , while
...n in the number of visitors via Heathrow,while the figures for Gatwick and Stansted wi...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 23, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... upward trend. Looking at the details,the number of people who travel via Heathro...
^^^^
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...tarted at 27,2 million in the first year,and then the figure rose significantly,to r...
^^^^
Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , to
...r,and then the figure rose significantly,to reach the highest point of 48,2 mln in ...
^^^
Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Despite
...h the highest point of 48,2 mln in 2000.Despite falling considerably in 2002,the trend...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mln in 2000.Despite falling considerably in 2002,the trend finished at 45,6 mln i...
^^
Line 5, column 27, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...last year. As regards Gatwick airport,the figure showed a considerable growth fro...
^^^^
Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: After
...5 mln to 51,1 mln between 1998 and 2002.After that,there was a sharp increase to 69,3...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...1,1 mln between 1998 and 2002.After that,there was a sharp increase to 69,3 mln in 200...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...r of passengers during the whole period.The number of passengers at Stansted was in...
^^^
Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...gers at Stansted was in a similar trend.The number began at the lowest point of 17,...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, then, while, as regards
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1843575419 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12273012972 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614525139665 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 22.4926829268 262% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.6524152243 43.030603864 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 309.333333333 112.824112599 274% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.6666666667 22.9334400587 260% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.3333333333 5.23603664747 255% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154003142831 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108565812512 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563514907179 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108565812512 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563514907179 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.8 13.2329268293 248% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 61.2550243902 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.9 10.3012195122 232% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.36 8.06136585366 129% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.9970731707 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.