It is often argued that in the era of modern technology the way of educating students should be example based learning, while others feel like earlier traditional approach. In my opinion I strongly agree with the latest way of understanding concepts by do various kinds of experiments. The reasons are it is easier to remember and easiest way to interpret things, these are explained in the essay.
Firstly, the present day kids are not very aware of the old techniques of coaching so if we force them to continue this way it will be more burden to carry forward studies. Moreover the latest way of interpretation of education is dominated by experimental based learning, as it is simple and useful way. For instance you have read a book and in the same day went to watch a movie. At the end of the day, movie will be registered firmly in our sub conscious when compared to the book we read. Research also shows that it is easier to remember when you see something rather than you study it somewhere. All we can say is example based study is superior than traditional way of learning.
Secondly, fast generation kids are too lazy to spend time on reading books and practicing on their own. Furthermore entertainment is what youth is attracted to, therefore we need to move into their feet and help them to focus on studying. Things we see in our day to day life are easier to remember, based on this theme practical learning is developed. This method is quite helpful to recognize what we have learnt in classroom. For instance for an lab exam student need to practice the experiment that he need to perform, if the kid attends the assessment merely by reading the observation then we can clearly verify the results. test taker with hands on knowledge will ace the evaluation rather compared to other. Finally it is crucial to have applied understanding of things.
To conclude, I agree that practical learning is best way to easily understand and recollect what we have learnt in the classroom.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'exampled'?
Suggestion: exampled
...the way of educating students should be example based learning, while others feel like ...
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Suggestion: Moreover,
...e more burden to carry forward studies. Moreover the latest way of interpretation of edu...
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Message: The adjective superior is normally used with 'to'.
Suggestion: to
... say is example based study is superior than traditional way of learning. Second...
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Suggestion: Furthermore,
...ding books and practicing on their own. Furthermore entertainment is what youth is attracte...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Suggestion: Finally,
...he evaluation rather compared to other. Finally it is crucial to have applied understan...
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...nclude, I agree that practical learning is best way to easily understand and recollect ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72883469186 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554285714286 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6566411795 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5882352941 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5882352941 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166389413524 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529865766772 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566207774841 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12156056853 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575190698565 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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