Although, many people believe that nowadays newspaper is most important source of news is convincing but I think in a reverse manner and agree to the given statement. My inclination is justified in the following paragraphs.
Out of the all arguments, the strongest one to prove my view is we can read news anywhere on the internet like whenever we doing travelling we can read news we don't need physical newspaper we just need mobile and internet. This is to say that people can know the news about all over the world very easily and watch the vedio of that news. Besides that, it is also true that everyone get the news as soon as the incidence happen. For instance, in surat city, which is in Gujarat, before 2 year at there occurred one dengerous incident was fire which is occurred by short circuit of wiring in the tuition class within 15 minutes everyone got the news with photos and vedios on internet.
The other reason to prove my point is public get technological news easily and get some more knowledge about that technology because in this era technology is part of our life we can't leave without technology like mobile, computer, television, etc.. In addition, the fact that some people don't like to read newspaper but they are interested in watching the news is also logical.
On the contrary, some people counter claim the mentioned support. The foremost argument they do is old people don't have knowledge about internet so they like to read physical newspaper. Also, in rural area there are no internet service but they can get newspaper very easily.
Thus, to wrap up the discussion, it can be said that majority people like to read news on the internet. My arguments justify that more and more people read news on the internet. But newspaper is also a source of news but we can not say that it is most important of news.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a reverse manner" with adverb for "reverse"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...s era technology is part of our life we cant leave without technology like mobile, c...
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Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...y like mobile, computer, television, etc.. In addition, the fact that some people ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, thus, for instance, i think, in addition, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70245398773 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48682969947 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496932515337 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5760507195 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429210469647 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16610215361 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133354179896 0.0667982634062 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264450522689 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159349902762 0.056905535591 280% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.