Some people focus on news in their own country, while others think it is more important to be aware of international news. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, a number of people have been changing the preference of news from domestic to international as they believe world news is more essential. However, from my own perspectives, local prints should be held in more pivotal role as its realistic relevance to our life.
On the one hand, international advocate might argue that human being are in the era of globalization consequently it stands to reason that each individual should be well-informed about current events for the purpose of integrating. The apotheosis is people who are working for ministry of foreign affairs. They ought to keep abreast of global conflicts, election and the like to propose diplomatic strategies towards other nations with the view of establishing not only harmonious but mutually equal beneficial relationship as well. Another example is in car manufacturing industry. Vietnam has always been lagged behind the world in terms of technology of gasoline-based vehicle nonetheless, it is sufficiently apparent to descry that in the time being electric cars are gaining ground due to its economic advantages and environmentally friendly worldwide. Via newspaper and divergent information sources, big co-operation like Vinfast can make advantage of massive-scaled modification to manufacture their own products to compete with different giant rivals.
On the other hand, readers of national prints vindicate their point of views with personal relevance. Needless to say, printings is the most scrupulous mirror of our society and therefore whereby consuming piece of news we will be more aware of surrounding issues. Take COVID-19 pandemic as an example. Newspaper will provide inhabitants with up-to-date data about active cases, death toll, restrictions of government, highly contagious area and the like. If community are oblivious to such information, it will be more likely for them to violate the regulations and even jeopardize the health safety of yourself and others. Furthermore, businesses can also benefited when editorial office propagate newly enacted laws such as tax. Moreover, by emphasizing on local news, individual can discern plaguing problems to come up with resolutions. For instance, a large portion of students can’t afford essential facilities in times of mandatory online studying. In recognition of this, a demographic of people have voluntarily fixed old phones to give to the need.
In conclusion, notwithstanding acknowledged privilege of international news, we should prioritize local counterpart given its actual pertinence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2169.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66318537859 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2256686654 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 176.041082164 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66318537859 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 688.5 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5899422605 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2777777778 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208950723468 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545886192296 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511470507792 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125992789125 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435330501387 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.66 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 145.0 78.4519038076 185% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.