Some people think that advertising aimed at children should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that advertisement considering infant as a potential market should be restricted. This essay will agree with that suggestion as it may include a number of incorrect information as well as forming kids bad behaviors.
Children especially those who are at the age of 3 to 9 will remember every information that they found on the internet, and they haven’t known how to distinguish whether this is bad or good for them. As a consequence, the piece of knowledge that they heard or saw will immediately affect to their mental and this might create wrongly thinking and communicating ways. In a recent survey by Cambridge university shows that 85% of British parents feel annoyed and worried that they couldn’t fix the way that their children said after they approached those bad knowledge. Thus, even when all the toxic advertshave been banned, the advertising will somehow find ways to get in touch with their babies.
Learning bad things isn’t the only disadvantage of the marketing target children, it’s extremely popular to go to a random supermarket and see a kid lay down crying so that the guardian ought to pleasant him by putting those toys in the shopping cart. Thus, not everyone has experience in encountering that situation so normally, to end up the crying, they will indulge their children's wishes even though the toy is above their financial abilities. It’s not surprised that based on a public research made by Monster. com, merely 67% of the infant whose parents satisfied all their desires grown up and considered themselves as the center of the universe.
In conclusion, advertising focus at kids should be made to stop die to two reasons which is gaining numerous inappropriate knowledge and making children behaviors changed followed by abundance of unforeseen circumstances.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 518, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Com
...d on a public research made by Monster. com, merely 67% of the infant whose parents...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so, thus, well, as for, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12416107383 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90388693722 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630872483221 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.1728180444 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.818181818 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0909090909 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12115996717 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465619326012 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485078248653 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866078606335 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452941844987 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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