Write a narrative essay about an interesting place (village/city...) you have been to
I am a travel lover, so I truly enjoy traveling. I love every moment when I go to new places, experience different cultures in my own country, and save memories with my friends and family. One of my most memorable and favorite places that I have been to was Da Lat because this was the first backpacking trip I made with my best friends.
Da Lat is famous for its beautiful and natural landscape, flowers, fresh vegetables, and fruit. Da Lat is also called a city of fog and flowers. That is the reason why we have a love for Da Lat. My friends and I thought that backpacking travel was more fun and exciting than touring travel. We planned for a 3-day-trip to Da Lat in the last 2019 spring, the most beautiful season of the year. Because of self-traveling, we had to schedule and list lots of must-do and must-eat places. We arrived at Da Lat in the late afternoon. After finishing checking at the homestay, we spent time wandering the night market to look for something to eat. Da Lat is not only famous for its magnificent sightseeings but the specialties as well.
Because of the fog city, Da Lat is well-known for cloud hunting. We woke up early in the morning and rode to the Cau Dat Farm to catch the moment in time. We hired motorbikes from the homestay, and we rode to any places that we wanted to visit without depending on the touring schedules. Da Lat cherry blossoms bloomed all along the two sides, melting into the cold of the weather. Da Lat is a special place for tourists because there is no traffic light in this city. However, the roads in Da Lat are spacious, and it rarely has a traffic jam. We visited Lam Vien Square, which has two massive cotton blocks representing the two specific flowers of Da Lat: wild sunflower and artichoke flower. Da Lat has several beautiful great green lakes such as Tuyen Lam, Gold Stream, or Xuan Huong. It was also the first time that we experienced the feeling of riding along the hills. We rode to the suburbs of Da Lat, where have lots of beautiful vegetable and flower growing areas. We visited the strawberry farm and the ecotourism park Hoa Son Dien Trang outside the inner of the city.
This trip has left me with many great experiences, and I have had many beautiful memories of this city. My friends and I save love for Da Lat in our hearts, and Da Lat city seems like a place that my friends and I never get bored to come.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1959.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 443.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42212189616 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48289554076 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51467268623 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 5.43587174349 294% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6149691879 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.36 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.72 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0496914835997 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.016730863634 0.084324248473 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265443682019 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0435279813573 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207420278254 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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