In my opinion, the greater than past of unequal age between parent and child in some countries has more disadvantages than advantages for two main reasons.
The first reason is that parents now have less time to spend with their children. When a child grows older, so does the age of their parents. They don't have enough time to play with their child because they are also growing older. When the children reach a certain age, they must go to work. They also have their own activities. As a result, the time for parents and children to spend together is limited.
The second reason is that parents find it difficult to communicate with their children. The larger the generation gap, the more difficult parenting becomes. Topics discussed by parents differ greatly from those discussed by their children. Young people have a proclivity to adapt to new situations and a desire to keep up with societal changes. As a result, when parents are of a different generation, they have very different ideas, and their judgments are frequently incompatible with those of their children. This is a significant disadvantage.
For these reasons, I am even more convinced that the disadvantages of today's parental-child age gap outweigh the benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... so does the age of their parents. They dont have enough time to play with their chi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02427184466 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77029695114 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563106796117 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5508498776 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9285714286 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7142857143 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249208035407 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851815907624 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964970210237 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185794620737 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119973643453 0.056905535591 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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