A government’s role is only to provide defence capability and urban infrastructure (roads, water supplies, etc.). All other services (education, health, social security) should be provided by private groups or individuals in the community.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Both the authorities and private organizations have the same significant influence on social infrastructure and service in the community. While there is a school of thought that the government should be responsible for providing defense and city infrastructures., I believe that individuals or non-government units should invest in other social services.
On the one hand, there is no denying that the authorities play a crucial role in providing defense and city fabrics. By all accounts, politicians who process more intelligent knowledge and visions than ordinary people in society can make important decisions to boost national development and ensure defense capacity. In terms of diplomacy and military, wise politicians could figure out the best way so that the national boundary would be kept safe in front of any enemy. Furthermore, the governments can use national budgets for social investments in urban infrastructure like housing, water supplies, and road expansion. For example, by funding from local authorities, fabrics would become unique and systematic so that citizens living in particular areas are beneficial.
However, I recognize that there are many reasons why private groups and individuals should invest in other social services. Firstly, they are more likely to be sensitive towards the latest tendencies in the community, which creates more successful opportunities for them to gain profits. Thanks to the investments of private individuals and groups, more services and activities are beneficial to citizens, more recreation and leisure people could gain. According to the national survey about the quality of social infrastructure, the complexes built or owned by private units tend to be used and organized better than ones that governments directly manage. Moreover, private individuals and organizations would contribute remarkable taxes and revenue to the local authorities, which helps them have budgets to build the country.
In conclusion, the authorities should ensure national security and urban fabric to create uniqueness and safety. In my opinion, the other organizations should contribute to other services so that people find them more beneficial.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in particular, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68902439024 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13537984647 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548780487805 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3494945234 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.285714286 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253822449284 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876892522764 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641513350256 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166132956024 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648929821688 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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