The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before.
What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?
It is common knowledge that the Internet has grown predominantly and has been a symbol of 21st-century society as it has revolutionized the way we transmit and consume information. However, it has also created some adverse problems that did not use to exist. This essay will discuss these problems and recommend some possible solutions to solve them.
Several unprecedented detrimental problems can be anticipated when the Internet has developed. The main issue is that children can access potentially hazardous websites. Besides educational websites that improve their knowledge, some other websites now are propagating illegal or depraved cultural products, such as pornography sites and dark webs. This is such an alarming situation as they will have mentally negative impacts on children, who are the representatives of our society in the future. Another problem is the growth of online fraud. That deception is reflected in articles or posts related to fake information as well as online money-appropriation tricks. Whether they are trust fraud or money fraud, they both reduce the reliability of the Internet. Furthermore, hacking is a worry to many Internet users as criminals get much sensitive personal information whenever they access their mobile devices.
To reduce these problems, governments, parents, and companies should take measures. Governments should set adequate controls for young people. There should be more complex website access criteria to prevent people aged below 18 from accessing dangerous websites. There should be heavy fines for people who intentionally propagate inappropriate cultural products. Also, they should focus more on educating children to be wise Internet users. Besides, it is advisable that parents closely monitor the children's activities. They should use a program to restrict their children access to bad sites and guide them to use the Internet and social media smartly. By doing that, they will contribute positively to their children's development. Moreover, it is crucial that companies and offices improve their IT security systems to secure important financial documents.
In summary, although the negative problems caused by the development of the Internet may seem impossible to eliminate, there are concrete steps that can be taken to tackle them. To take these steps will make the Internet, an iconic technological innovation, a safer place for everyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, may, moreover, so, well, in summary, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2051.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58855585831 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00763629038 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599455040872 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1760818202 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2272727273 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6818181818 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179218918108 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534998044771 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619556808791 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128463957393 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701893823624 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 78.4519038076 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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