Some people believe that young people should spend more of their time with their families and less on entertainment outside the home. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
There exists a contentious topic whether youngsters should spend their time with their families rather than on leisure activities outside. From my perspective, both of these trends are of equal importance and hereafter explained.
On the one hand, some people believe that it is crucial for the youth to devote their time to their family members. Firstly, spending quality time with relations is an efficient way to reinforce family bond. In fact, by taking part in various activities together like cooking or playing sports, parents and children, or brothers and sisters can be more empathetic towards each other, thus creating much stronger connections within the family. Furthermore, it is believed that a young person that stays with family for a large amount of time may have a better manner, since it allows parents chances to educate their children about social orders and etiquettes.
On the other hand, it can be argued that young people would also benefit from outdoor activities. Going out enables them to interact with new people and expand their social circle, which can help lead them to exciting opportunities. For instance, after joining a summer camp, one can make friends with a number of new friends, these acquaintances may later introduce him to a job position at their workplace because they remember him as a highly responsible person at that summer camp. Additionally, the youth can also enhance their soft skills such as communication skills or teamwork skills while joining extracurricular activities. These skills would be a major plus when the youth join the workforce later in their lives. Research has shown that those who are equipped with these skills are likely to perform excellently at working environments.
In conclusion, I am convinced that the young generation should both spare time for their families and involve in leisure activities at the same time for the most fulfilled growth and development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, may, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23322683706 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7341635761 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603833865815 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3103134075 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308419589911 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11250968659 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847461774468 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196418919647 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530781826197 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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