You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter.
-explain the reasons for the noise.
-Apologize.
-describe what action you will take.
Dear neighbors,
I am writing with regard to your complaint about all the disturbance I have caused to you. I live next to your door, number six. I would like you to know that I have been facing terrible and awkward problems in my flat that need to be fixed. Also, I have considered to finish as soon as I can.
Moreover, this apartment was made with many inaccuracies. The main pipe conducted to the sink is liking too much water, likewise; the toilet does not flush at all and it makes a disturbing noise during the nights. Therefore, they require a complex repairing and maintenance. For that reason, I hired two plumbers to make the repair work in order to give a clear solution to this issue.
As I am aware you are disappointed with me. I know you have been so nice people, that is why, I would not like to continue depriving you of your privacy. In addition, I ought to apologize for all the inconvenience. Every morning is a great disaster with all the noise that you may have to stand and I am extremely ashamed.
On the other hand, I am eager to reschedule the forthcoming plumbing tasks for next weekend. I think this is the best action I could carry out. I will look into the matter. Furthermore, I would be most grateful if you could reply at your earliest convenience so that I would know your point of view.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Naile.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
.... I live next to your door, number six. I would like you to know that I have been...
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Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...es. The main pipe conducted to the sink is liking too much water, likewise; the toilet do...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...give a clear solution to this issue. As I am aware you are disappointed with me...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, likewise, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, i think, in addition, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1148.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 256.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.484375 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61824838573 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58984375 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 353.7 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.13402061856 186% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9749755159 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.7777777778 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2222222222 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298394944818 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830829215 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639289663885 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149315116382 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620372046764 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.11 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.