Your company has recently introduced a new work uniform. You are mostly happy with the uniform, but there is one thing that you do not like. Write a letter to your manager. In the letter:
• say what you like about the uniform
• explain what you don’t you like about the uniform
• suggest how the uniform can be improved
Dear Manager,
I am working in the Quality Control department for the company. I am writing this to raise my concerns about the new uniform which has been introduced recently and would like to suggest a few amendments our organization can make to improve their uniform.
First of all, it is a lovely uniform with fine fabric material and comfortable for full time wearing in the factory. Additionally, the colour is better than the previous uniform. Also, the major advantage is that this material is machine washable so that we don’t have to spend time for hand wash.
However, the uniform does not have enough pockets. While working in the factory, we have to carry so many measurement tools for the quality measurement of products. Pockets should be the first priority for our attire to hold mechanical devices. Also, employees of all department have the uniform with the logo of our company, but we didn’t have on a few uniforms.
In order to improve that the company’s management could collect back our uniforms for the establishment of tool pockets on that. Also, it would be good if we have the company’s logo exactly on the front pocket of the shirt.
I look forward to your reply and do let us know when and where we need to submit our attires.
Yours sincerely,
Yash Mehta
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| 2021-11-10 | ymck8163 | 84 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Manager, I am working in the Quality Control depa...
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Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ine fabric material and comfortable for full time wearing in the factory. Additionally, t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80803571429 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62496583433 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598214285714 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.544447317 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8461538462 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157237142876 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573470143524 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480369663619 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866030678015 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455619949368 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.