Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house. They have just sent you some holidays photos.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter:
1-Thank them for the holidays and the photos
2-explain why you didn't write earlier
3-Invite them to come and stay with you
Dear Dave and Johanna
I'm writing to thank you for the fantastic holidays that I spent at your place last month. Your whole family makes me feel like one of your own. I had a great time there, the landscapes are overwhelming, the city is very modern, and the people are so kind. I can't wait to go back there again next year. Also, the pictures look amazing; Jessica did a great job. They're so colorful and professional; therefore, they will be on my Instagram as soon as possible. Thanks again for that.
Unfortunately, I couldn't contact you before; I've been working hard on a critical project and arriving home late just to get some sleep. Moreover, I will be free for my birthday weekend, and I'm planning a big party so it would be huge if you could visit me.
I would love to host you at my place. We will party and have a good time. Later on, I'll take you around town.
With love Carlos
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Dave and Johanna Im writing to thank you for the fantastic ...
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Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...y modern, and the people are so kind. I cant wait to go back there again next year. ...
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Line 3, column 361, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: They're
... look amazing; Jessica did a great job. Theyre so colorful and professional; therefore...
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Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...nks again for that. Unfortunately, I couldnt contact you before; Ive been working ha...
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Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...tunately, I couldnt contact you before; Ive been working hard on a critical project...
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Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ll be free for my birthday weekend, and Im planning a big party so it would be hug...
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Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...l party and have a good time. Later on, Ill take you around town. With love Ca...
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Line 7, column 111, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me. Later on, Ill take you around town. With love Carlos
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 735.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.375 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37778807588 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.720238095238 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0280966411 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.5384615385 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9230769231 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260795728468 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766305552731 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847329761835 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120256588355 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075078106816 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.