Each parent has their own opinion about raising children. Currently, there is a highly debate about whether the youth should follow traditions or have liberty about behavior they want. In my point of view, I think young people should not too focusing on one side, we should balance it.
To begin with,the youth has thought that follow western ideas to be more fashionable. For example, in Vietnam, the youth usually learns dressing of China, Korea,... which opposed to the Vietnam culture, so everyone see they do not have any traditional Vietnam anymore. They think those cultures are obsolete and prevent the modern development. They do not perceive that in order that a country can grow up so fast, they also need copy what is the best of other countries. German is one of the examples, they learn from Japan, which has the best education in the world but they still keep their own culture. Another reason is that the traditions are good so it is worth to preserve the quality of it as well as the premise to improve yourself.
On the other hand, it is easy to understand why young people want to behave free. They were born and grown up in the modern era, because of that, they are more attracted to creativity, new things than outdated traditions. And if we force them into traditions, they will lose the creative which is one of the most important factor to go to modernize the country.
In conclusion, I believe everything is moderate, all has merits and drawbacks, so only by balancing it can we become a better person.
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Nowadays,the debate over …
Nowadays,the debate over whether the flexibility of young people should be encouraged in the mordern world is raising myriad of controversial points of view.Many peole believe that the youth should respect and have a life style that sticks closely to traditional rules.Other protest that such generations should spread their wings and be free, regardless of the rigidity traditions.In my opinion, neither of these attitudes captures the significance of the end to the means for youth,s lifestyle, so valid arguments will be discussed in this essay.
To begin with, it is erroneous to assume that everything relating to traditions is quaint. Each culture and its value are described as something charismatic enigmas, which were coined after millennium. So, it is not a bad idea to have a little bit old – school life style. In addition, there are some some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, well, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69888475836 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47632199934 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617100371747 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6379656063 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.2857142857 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276433661591 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845311854955 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917503870027 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144118659408 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108573204514 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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