Young people who commit serious crimes, such as robbery or violent attacks should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The act of committing a crime is serious enough that the perpetrators should be held accountable. As the number of juvenile criminals is on the rise, there are some who believe that they should be punished the same as adults. The punishments given to young people should be less severe than those given to adults, in my opinion.
It is incorrect to say that the youth are nearly innocent because they are intoxicated, immature and unaware of the consequences of their actions when justifying killing and swindling. They cannot be excused for their actions, there are young criminals who take advantage of the fact that they are not old enough to be punished by the law and commit crimes. As far as they are concerned, this will allow them to evade prosecution or even avoid prison time.
Because of this, each individual should be judged on the basis of their age. Life in prison and the death penalty are two of the harshest punishments that the government can impose. In the end, it will be too late for the perpetrators to undo the damage they've already done. That could have a negative impact on the country as a whole. We need to do something else in order to reduce crime, such as providing better education or raising public awareness. Educating them on the importance of distinguishing between good and bad and helping them to plan for a brighter future. If they've committed a crime, we can give them a second chance and allow them to transform into a better person rather than imposing harsh penalties.
As a result, I believe they should be punished, but in a different manner than adults.
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... I believe they should be punished, but in a different manner than adults.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73309608541 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63484141473 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562277580071 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.843050111 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224178748802 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746295227503 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692668150903 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137591827542 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875496643485 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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