Young people who commit serious crimes, such as robbery or violent attacks should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Committing a crime is a serious offense for which the perpetrators must be punished. Because the rate of juvenile crime is on the rise these days, some argue that young people should be punished in the same way as adults. Even though young people make mistakes, I believe their punishments should be less severe than those meted out to adults.
It is incorrect to say that the youth are virtually innocent because they are elated, immature, and unaware of the consequences of their actions if they use that reason to justify killing and swindling. Young criminals who appear to take advantage of the fact that they are not old enough to be punished by the law then commit crimes cannot be forgiven. They believe that by doing so, they will be able to avoid being sentenced or even get away with it.
Nonetheless, each decision should be made in light of their age. If the government imposes the most severe penalties, such as life in prison and death, It has the potential to destroy the youth, as well as those who have committed crimes, because they will not be able to undo what they have done. It is possible that this will have a negative impact on the country. To reduce the rate of crime, we should make other changes, such as better education and increased awareness. Assisting them in recognizing what is good and what is bad in order to help them have a better future. Furthermore, if they committed a crime, we can give them a second chance, allowing them to renovate and transform into a better person, which is preferable to harsh punishments that can destroy their lives.
With that said, I believe they should be punished, but not in the same way that adults are.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, nonetheless, second, so, then, well, such as, as well as, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67224080268 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46000206523 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5436983537 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.461538462 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300048317761 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111248641985 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755234389331 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19668254808 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663249967145 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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