Some people believe that happiness and emotional maturity are more important than physical health, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is believe by a few individuals that joyfulness and controlling emotions are imperative rather than physical fitness, whereas other people do not concur with this viewpoint.
There are stong arguments on the each sides, which will be discussed now. In my opinion, I believe that both happiness and mental health as well as physical well-being are vital in the lives of people.
On the one hand, the supports of felicity and the maturity of emotions point out that they are key to success. It seems that when people are happy, they are highly likely to be motivated and inspire others too. Having an optimistic attitude, benefits those around them immensely. The next point is that being emotionally mature enables people to handle adversity effectively without feeling too must disappointed. Since they are mentally strong, they provide some beneficial advice to someone facing difficulties. The more a person is happy and mentally strong, the better the positive development of a person’s personality. They also think that physical health is secondary because they feel it is easier to work towards achieving physical stength; however, working towards mental health requires more efforts.
On the other hand, those who argue says that physical health is of greater importance. If people are physically weak, it has a direct relation with their mental health and joyness in lives. For instance, someone who is obese may choose to stay at home in lieu of socialising. He might be facing depression and anxiety issues; consequently, he appears not to be jubilent. Furthermore, exercising helps to prevent many chronic dieases such as heart problems, diabetes, and blood pressure. They point out that the benefits accuring from it are by no means negligible.
In my view, happiness and expressing emotion have equal importance to physical health. It seems that having a balanced combination of both makes a person truely exhilarated and contented with their life.
In conclusion, although some give more significance to happiness and emotional maturity instead of physical fitness, having imbalance of both causes distress in people’s lives. Therefore, I think people should strive to strike a balance between these two for achieving genuine contentment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
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Line 4, column 494, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'faces'.
Suggestion: faces
...ovide some beneficial advice to someone facing difficulties. The more a person is happ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1914.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34636871508 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80493107551 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59217877095 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2762678196 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342043854898 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878259920082 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889975442012 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172421342835 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458512601051 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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