In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why is this happening? How should they be punished?
Recently, there has been a surge in the number of juvenile delinquents worldwide. Look at this matter in-depth, multiple reasons can be found as a root of this problem and young offenders should be punished according to their crimes’ severity but not in jail
Regarding the reasons, this phenomenon is derived primarily from the lack of time spent by parents with children, leading to their shortage of knowledge and awareness. It is true that in this hectic world, many parents are too occupied with their jobs that barely can they spend sufficient time with their children to monitor and educate them properly. In addition, with the prevalence of violence on almost every kind of platform nowadays, they are more easily enticed to go off the track
When it comes to young people’s punishments, it should be strong but not too harsh like sentencing them in prisons. In fact, it is scientifically proved that people’s brains are not fully developed until they turn 25, therefore, some young adolescents may commit crimes by accident and prison may not act as a deterrence for them but even the opposite. Consequently, the ultimate method to punish them is sending them back to their families or to some special institutions where there are training to help show their flaws and prevent them from misunderstanding the law
To conclude, it is a pressing issue that the number of juvenile delinquents is escalating substantially. This can be contributed by the insufficient care from their parents that make them can not be aware of wrongdoings and as they are not fully grown-up we should not put them into jail as a punishment
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 499, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: helping
...l institutions where there are training to help show their flaws and prevent them from ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, look, may, regarding, so, therefore, in addition, in fact, kind of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99635036496 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85423160823 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569343065693 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.7240364872 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 195.571428571 106.682146367 183% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.1428571429 20.7667163134 188% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4285714286 7.06120827912 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22741548636 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977122938127 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065482619125 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13694660037 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329014172228 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.7 13.0946893788 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.