In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for the governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
Do you agree or disagree?
In many parts of the universe a large number of people are getting some diseases because of eating a lot of fast food, therefore governments should increase taxes on this sort of food in order to avoid eating too much. I completely disagree with this statement because Illness is not concerned with fast food everyone should walk for a physical exercise early in the morning and evening in order to be healthy.
First of all, It doesn't matter what kind of food you eat but it doesn't matter if you eat without regular physical exercise a very well-known doctor says it is useless to just stay without physical exercise and also it won't help you staying energetic until you involve yourself in physical exercise, for instance if you walk every day early in the morning and evening it'll digest what you eat regarding fast food.
On the other hand a lot of vegetables are using in fast food and there are variety of fast food but some of them cannot be cooked without vegetables so if government impose higher taxes on fast food in addition not to be eaten fast food, alternatively oil, flour and vegetables will be very expensive because all of the above are using in fast food but a large number of people are very poor even they hardly buy oil, flour and other needable things for survival. So it is not a good idea for the governments to impose higher taxes on fast food. So therefore the government should care for poor people as well and those who believe in illness just because of fast food then they should avoid eating it as well as you must continue regularl exercise so that they could be healthier in the future.
In conclusion, fast food isn't the major problem of being sick, if the government impose higher taxes on fast food in order to solve the problems of diseases, it'll automatically impact on poor people who hardly survive themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
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Message: Use simply 'So' or 'therefore'.
Suggestion: So; Therefore
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, sort of, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6253776435 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39215791161 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.447129909366 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.2975951904 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.017395883 49.4020404114 247% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 218.714285714 106.682146367 205% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.2857142857 20.7667163134 228% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.2857142857 7.06120827912 330% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412533782634 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.229650458147 0.084324248473 272% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858845781658 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262033537697 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614266758718 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.0 13.0946893788 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.23 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.4 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.1190380762 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.