Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe that actions can be taken to bring about the change. Discuss both and give your opinion.
The detrimental effect of human activity is to endanger wild creatures on the Earth, and this is not able to alter due to the habitat destruction. However, it is believed that this issue can be tackled by conducting a conservation program.
To begin with, a man-made disaster originated by activity of human is to threaten wild species and cannot be avoided, because the places where they live are severely demised. That is to say, when the environment is destructed by human’s particular purposes such as urbanization, it decreases wide-range of habitats, causing the extinction of endemic animals and plants. For instance, Indonesia in 2018 developed to expand urban areas in Central Borneo by deforesting rainforests, then consequently this may vanish orangutans and orchards in next several years. Nevertheless, it is a belief that this problem can be solved by the environmental action.
It is true that conservation has an ability to halt the demerit revealed by human-race, just like real-time monitoring. This is because, if plants and animals are under surveillance, the chance to survive in this severe condition will increase. For example, WWF has held a program to conserve sharks and mangroves globally by using satellite to suspect the migration patterns and distribution, respectively. Since 2021, the number of these species has inclined from 10% to 15%, having a tendency to grow considerably in the future. Therefore, several actions should be taken to create life rate of endangered species.
In conclusion, it is a truth that some actions can stop the bad effect of man-made catastrophe due to activity of human. Where possible, this program should be continued, so that our offspring can see these species in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26071428571 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0541018754 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1630102952 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.307692308 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6153846154 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224261268878 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796527851205 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559819580945 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141408481336 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247681006491 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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