Which is the most important cultural identifier or the feature that defines your cultural identity?
In today's multicultural societies, cultural identifiers have an increasingly stronger influence on people's everyday lives as a means to define themselves. This can be simply demonstrated through many aspects such as: music, shared values and beliefs, history,… In my opinion, the most noticeable cultural identifier of Vietnamese people is our traditional food since it represents a long rough history and leaves a deep impression of Vietnam on the world stage.
To begin with, Vietnamese traditional food is a summation of our rough history with invasions of many countries. Colonized and governed by foreign countries for such a long period, Vietnamese people, throughout history, have absorbed many characteristics of other countries’ cuisine and made them ours. Banh mi, a well-known Vietnamese dish, for instance, is the combination of French and Vietnamese cuisine. During the French colonial era, French troops of the army brought along their signature food, such as: baguette, pate, baloney,… And Vietnamese people have added some of our spices and ingredients, like pickle cucumber, cha lua,…and successfully made one of the world's most delicious sandwiches, namely banh mi. The story about the origins of Banh mi greatly demonstrates how cuisine can effectively demonstrate a culture’s history.
Furthermore, it is impossible to mention Vietnam without praising our traditional food which has firmly put Vietnam on the world’s culinary map. Vietnamese cuisine, in fact, is globally noted for many of its distinctive features such as: an impressive array of cooking methods, a diversity of spices and flavors in every dish,…, making the vast majority of the world fall in love with it. One example is Pho, right after introduced globally by the flow of Vietnamese immigrants in the 1990s, it has immediately become a food phenomenon in many countries for its fatty hot soup with many spices. In major cities, these days, it is not hard to find a pho restaurant who welcomes bustling flows of customers everyday. And pho is one of many dishes representing Vietnam on the world stage.
In conclusion, although the world has become increasingly interconnected, I strongly believe that the traditional food of each culture still stand distinctively and represent its profound values.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, still, well, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47058823529 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1032976177 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59943977591 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.8266801246 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.230769231 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4615384615 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110528605142 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408282816854 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533429087088 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816686792256 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642033965599 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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