Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, the number of travelers has increased (year-to-year) than it in the past because of the affordable transports. Furthermore, one of the advantages of travelling for tourists is to release mental pressure.
To begin with, travelling is becoming more popular because the price of transportation is cost less in comparison with it in a decade ago, which it was so expensive. Thanks to online business travels, when these agents offer a discount for reservation ticket of transportation, more and more tourists are interested in buying to go to far away places, and this could not find ten years ago in face-to-face agent. For instance, Indonesian e-commerce, Travels, gives a 50%-discount-voucher for international flight monthly, then this attracts the users to book a seat, while Indonesian tourists having a desire to travel abroad should allocate expensively millions of rupiahs before 2010, without any special condition of cost reduction.
In terms of the merits in travelling, one of those is to unwind mental stress due to working hard. This is because people have a tendency to release anxiety because of work pressure by watching the wonderful scenery, affecting to release positive hormone to be relaxed. For example, visitors taking a long journey to natural attractions, such as a mountain, may fell better by staring at the green stunning land space, then this results to stimulate brain to produce dopamine. Therefore, they will be very calm and chill due to this good chemical substance influence, forgetting the mental burden while occupying.
In conclusion, it is true that the number of travelers is growing increasingly rather than it in the past because of inexpensive budget of transportation. Moreover, one of the benefits for having a journey is to release anxiety mentally. Where possible, people should allocate budget and schedule itineraries properly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37373737374 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14412497931 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609427609428 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.1143411388 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218342970975 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741915947363 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490259765912 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134540657055 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497575128264 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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