Group or team activities can teach more important skills for life than those activities which are done alone.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.
Some people argue that do activities together can give you more essential knowledge for life rather than those activities which are accomplish by oneself. However, both of views have any excess each other. This essay will explain the reason why finishing some activities alone is does not worth it than team.
Alone activities will complete many task faster, on the other hand, do some activities by oneself can decries distraction. Make your activities being more focus, relax without forced from other or by deadline. But, if some people chose to stand in this situation, they never going to another level of their self. Human is social thing, when they are avoid to join with other. Means resist act of god, that they are social beings. Someone is able to finish him lesson by itself, but work with others people give more experience for their life. When someone have good networking with other its very potential to grow better.
Nowadays is collaboration era, many people build large networking together, to make their dream come true. People working together are able to smash every obstacle in the street of success. Teamwork will teach people many things in process to reach goals. In addition, join with great group can give people more support from others member. people are going to be more enthusiastic within exhilarating atmosphere, feel more enjoyable with all part of your activity. When lose idea, people can ask other member to give suggestion.
In conclusion I will deliver my views according to both views, people are social beings. They are need other to reach a large goal, bigger team have bigger dream. Nowadays is collaboration era, many people build large networking together, to make their dream come true.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, thus, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05208333333 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36655571189 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569444444444 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8119541702 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.5789473684 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1578947368 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84210526316 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22213467491 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695114742017 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958931777442 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154414572463 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12931073538 0.056905535591 227% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.