You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you.
Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter
advise them of your situation
explain how this is affecting you
request a new card
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear
Dear Mr. Jones,
I am writing with regard to few issues that I am currently facing because I lost my student identification card.
It has been almost one week since I've misplaced my card and I cannot seem to remember as to how I lost it. I used it last thursday to get into school's renaissance fair and I might have lost it in the crowd.
After missing this permit card, I am not able to access many curriculam rooms such as the computer chamber, the school library and the science laboratory. Although, I study many valuable things from the classes, I feel that practical knowledge is also necessary to perform better during the examinations.
Hence, I request you to please grant me a new card as final examinations are next month and I wanted to use the science laboratory and the school library because I want to get good grades.
I would greatly appreciate your help! Thank you for your consideration.
Your's sincerely,
Rahul Dev
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
... Mr. Jones, I am writing with regard to few issues that I am currently facing b...
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Line 5, column 35, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...d. It has been almost one week since Ive misplaced my card and I cannot seem to ...
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Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lasts'?
Suggestion: lasts
...remember as to how I lost it. I used it last thursday to get into schools renaissanc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, as to, i feel, such as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 791.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76506024096 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73306155985 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.692771084337 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.3350755254 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.875 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 4.34317383033 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261674693881 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980223152574 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742548128617 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127071402544 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756287357345 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.