Some people say that physical education classes are an important part of a child’s education. Others believe that it is more important to focus on academics during school time. Discuss both these views and give your opinion
Some people say that physical education classes is an important section of schooling while others believe that it is more important to focus on academics. Overall, I believe that a comprehensive environment including both academics and physical education should be provided for children. Physical education aids people to become fit both physically and mentally., whereas academics helps learners set a good foundation for future career.
On the one hand, having good academic grades is essential for building a secure standing in job market. According to this point of view, studying creates and develops a unique perspective of life for learners. The more knowledge you gain, the more opportunities will open up to help you achieve better results in personal growth. Applicants with a higher education study would be more appreciated by recruiters compared to those who have lower one.
On the other hand, physical education classes improve children's physical condition as well as mental health. As the saying goes, “All work and no play make Jack a dull boy”, it’s always better for children to have time for outside activities, especially after school or during schooltime. In that way, they can refresh their minds to work and study more efficiently afterwards. Additionally, physical activities improve muscle strength, boost endurance and make bones stronger, therefore, physical practice is definitely a required subject for children to develop their physical condition.
In conclusion, academic and physical education are perfect combination since academics illuminate the career path while physical section helps them to build a stronger and healthier lifestyle. Thus, both academic and physical education should not be neglect as both contribute greatly to children’s grown not only in strength but also comprehension.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62007168459 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90228756024 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637992831541 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8799427537 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.615384615 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349883737409 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129020486059 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135196291094 0.0667982634062 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21675851686 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142553105552 0.056905535591 251% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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