You are leaving a job and coming back to your hometown. Write a letter to your friend and say
– What is the reason for your leaving?
– What do you plan to do?
– Where and when will you meet your friend to discuss it?
7416 Redstone RD,
Mississauga, ON
L4T2C5
Date: 9-01-2022
Dear Suman,
How are you? How are your family members? How is the weather there? I hope you are doing well. I am also fine here. I am writing you to tell you i am leaving my current job because of less salary as well as i have been working here since two years but i did not get promoted.
I am planning to apply for another lucrative job which will not only contribute to my financial position but also gives a diverse experience that is required in order to hold higher paid jobs in the upcoming time. So, i am coming back home tomorrow.
I will meet you at the central park of the city a day after tomorrow in the evening at around 4 o clock to discuss regarding this matter. I am waiting to meet you soon.
Take care,
With love
Sarbjeet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
7416 Redstone RD, Mississauga, ON L4T2C5 Date: 9-01-2022...
^^^
Line 6, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... L4T2C5 Date: 9-01-2022 Dear Suman, How are you? How are your family members...
^^^
Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ou are doing well. I am also fine here. I am writing you to tell you i am leaving...
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Line 7, column 146, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...fine here. I am writing you to tell you i am leaving my current job because of le...
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Line 7, column 253, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e been working here since two years but i did not get promoted. I am planning...
^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o years but i did not get promoted. I am planning to apply for another lucrat...
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Line 9, column 219, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...her paid jobs in the upcoming time. So, i am coming back home tomorrow. I wil...
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Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...matter. I am waiting to meet you soon. Take care, With love Sarbjeet
^^^
Line 13, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...waiting to meet you soon. Take care, With love Sarbjeet
^^^
Line 15, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on. Take care, With love Sarbjeet
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, regarding, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 671.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38562091503 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3312361275 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.705882352941 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.4530708897 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.0 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9090909091 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256985401867 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859130405892 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675410331482 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156078508911 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613198537004 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.59 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.