Some people believe that it is a good idea that older people continue to work if
it is possible for them to do. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people widely think that it is a good idea that older citizens work at their old
ages if it is available for them to do. In my point of view, I strongly agree with this
opinion.
On one hand, there are several reasons why elder people should continue to work if
they are able to do. Firstly, older people have more experience in this work, with
their knowledge and skills, they may finish work faster and effectively than the
young generations. Besides, older people can show and teach young people how to
do jobs more correctly and quickly. Therefore, this can lead to an increase in work
productivity, which is a good effect on the economy. Moreover, older people will
have extra income when they work at their old age. Thus, they can live
independently, do not be dependent on anyone, they can pay for things that they
enjoy, improve their living standard. Hence, this may make the country's GDP
increase, help the economy develop.
On the other hand, that the elder takes part in working at their old ages causes
many problems. The main reason why older citizens should enjoy their age
retirement is their health. Older people cannot be strong as young generations, they
can easily get into industrial accidents, which may be dangerous for their life. In
addition, the older may find it hard to get used to working with high technology
equipment. This brings about a negative effect on their work effectiveness.
In conclusion, although the elder continues to work may have many disadvantages
and problems, I still strongly believe that it is a good idea that older citizens should
work at their old ages if they can and want to do it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84375 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48517741235 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524305555556 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7289667577 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.38176352705 479% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322661864377 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122600464038 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110562813444 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10431516712 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788962390275 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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