Some people believe that sport has an important role in society. Others, however, feel that it is nothing more than a leisure activity for some people.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People have different views on whether sport is thought to be a leisure pursuit. While some people approve of this suggestion, I firmly believe that sport has an enormous impact on the community.
On the one hand, many think that sport should be considered an optional task to do daily. To begin with, the initial reason why some people underestimate this kind of outdoor activity is the heavier importance of dealing with the financial burden. Given that most adults' time was spent on work to pay their bills, they find it hard to balance their lifestyles with any more doings let alone exercises. Consequently, sports seem less essential due to the fact that they may influence jobs and opportunities to make more money. Secondly, many people disparage sport thanks to a lack of information on the advantages sport can bring - increasing productivity, preventing disease, and lengthening our longevity. The sport’s depreciation will continue until they can access this knowledge.
On the other hand, sport acts as a positively contributing factor to the improvement of society’s healthcare and prosperity on the whole. According to an Oxford case study on obesity in the US, England, and Australia, the noticeable consumption of high-cholesterol food is posing a threat to the governments on the rise of cardiovascular and diabetic patients. As a result, it is urgent to encourage residents to go on a diet, especially bringing sport as a vital activity to improve their physical and mental health. Furthermore, sports festivals and events which are held yearly make plenty of economic contributions to many nations. People living in these countries will no longer be in fear of unemployment since there would be a large number of occupations given from tourism and commerce including sport.
In conclusion, many people disregard sport because they do not know the profits of playing sports in their lives. However, I side with those who value sports as one driver of societal development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 733, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, on the whole, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21052631579 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01006003907 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628482972136 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7559675249 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.2 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234989462932 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771552939365 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571155003222 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155718001826 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686569613863 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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