some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people expect tourists to follow local customs and behavior while, other think that the local people should welcome cultural differences. In my opinion, there should be a delicate balance between these two extremes.
On the one hand, tourists should assimilate local’s culture. Assimilation helps them be accepted by local people which has a focal role to have a delightful vacation. If a tourist has an aggressive behavior, based on local’s culture, residents might deceive him or give him misleading advices or lead him to some dangerous situation. Therefore, it would be a tough and somewhat hazardous condition. In addition, as eco-tourists try to reduce their environmental footprints when they visit a natural attraction, tourist should be careful about the effects of their behavior on local people.
On the other hand, one of the main reason of different communities’ development is learning from each other and taking their own advantages. Tourism industry can have extra benefits beyond its economic effects. Tourists can introduce their culture and make positives changes in local behaviors and improve the resiliency. It would be a chance for local people to identify their identity among their differences and make themselves better by putting the fallacies away. If the tourists behave exactly like a native, there is not any things to make people think about themselves and why they act differently.
In conclusion, there should be a balance between acting like an indigenous and not considering the context in what should be worn or how should behave. These two scenario have their own advantages and if a community wants to be benefited from both of them, it should makes a delicate balance between them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 267, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
... benefited from both of them, it should makes a delicate balance between them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26714801444 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83181184694 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57761732852 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9726947619 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.214285714 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268914421624 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977250185145 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100205838164 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194376544818 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113172771604 0.056905535591 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.