In many countries, more and more young people are leaving school and unable to find jobs after graduation. What problems do you think youth unemployment will cause to the individual and society? Give reasons and make some suggestions.
Dropping out of the school and being under unemployment of the youth is a grave problem in the developed society. The state of unemployment promotes plethora of serious repercussions to each person and the whole public.
On the one hand, from my point of view, there is a flew of distinct disadvantages in the scope of individuals. Firstly, people having no full of faccuties to find a career and living with their relatives are taken into account of a burden of the family. Their finance ability are completely counting on the other people. These situations arouse the disappointing feelings and prospects of their parents, which provoke the negative people' s perspectives appeared such as disrespect, scorn,...
Secondly, it is on the card that people who are jobless may go astray to earn money regardless of the jeopardies and abuse. They can be illegal tools for the gangs to carry out lawless acts such as providing banned drugs, narcotics, and other substances that are harmful to human health and lifestyle.
On the second hand, it has a range of cons in the wider context of society. Firstly, those people who are unemployed are considered to be not only a burden of their family but also the society. The tax of the government have a tendency to enhence the technology, ammenities or the infrastructure for the flourish of a country, in place of that they utilize it to have charities to those groups as a encouragement for them to try their utmost to escape from the state of joblessness and turn over a new leaf.
Second, it has an impact on society because of the aging workforce. This means that older people will have to work more as a result of the scarcity of young people who can find work. If this tendency continues, there will come a time when older experts will be unable to instruct younger individuals, leaving the country with fewer professionals.
Thirdly, the proportion of underemployment in that nation experiencing a dramatic increase is able to lead the other countries' eyes about a country which are not capable of figuring out the matters of their inhabitans. As a result, the long- term relationship will weaken much more effortlessly and the host country lose the cooperations between the super power nations such as the United States, United Kingoms,... which are the backbone for the flourish and existence of that nation in the worldwide.
To sum up, the unemployment is the roof reason of those mentioned above consequences. As far as I am concerned, it is obligatory for each government to provide the huge amount of jobs to eleminate the unemployment lingered in each country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2191.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 445.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92359550562 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91930438437 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537078651685 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 686.7 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5335516101 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.315789474 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4210526316 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168536528825 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446637490922 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466096438051 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743274648049 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562946886557 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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