In many countries, more and more young people are leaving school and unable to find jobs after graduation. What problems do you think youth unemployment will cause to the individual and society? Give reasons and make some suggestions.
It is obviously observed that in recent years a number of graduates have struggled to join employment, which lay several detrimental influences on our society and even on their own. Hence, there are some methods to solve this negatively commonplace matter.
As a matter of fact, our society might face unpleasant impacts when the graduates unable to engage in any occupational areas. Many people after graduation, jobless for a long period of time, decide to live on their parents even though those senior citizens are deemed to rest, putting them under pressure. Some involve in several wrong-doings or crime so as to earn an adequate amount of money for a living as a result of being on hunt for job hopelessly. These circumstances have seriously stagnated the society. Additionally, experienced employees find it difficult to retire or resign, as a result a considerable number of newly graduated people do not have an opportunities to work in several economic fields which require creativeness or innovative ideas. Due to this matter, not only the young individual but also the economic is not able to thrive.
In order to address this sort of predicament, it is essential to change those individuals’ mindset. No matter how outstanding their study results are, the young need to recognise their ability, capacity and quality because when they acknowledge well who they are, they can opt for a proper career path. If individuals are aware of themselves sooner, at university or high school, it is advantageous for them to broaden their own skills and knowledge before joining job market. Also income or salary seems a significant determinant for any of us but as a novice in any industry, the young should consider experience rather than income. Approving of the modest amount of income would offer a new employee to work with eminent people or in their favourite fields. After acquiring enough experience, individuals can definitely conceive the idea of changing their job with better offerings.
To conclude, obtaining a suitable occupation these days in some nations for the newly graduated persons are supposed to be challenging. However for better or worse any of us ought to work and contribute to the development of our society in stead of leaving solemn circumstances to be handled.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 175, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...le after graduation, jobless for a long period of time, decide to live on their parents even t...
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Line 2, column 352, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...nvolve in several wrong-doings or crime so as to earn an adequate amount of money for a ...
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Line 2, column 661, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an opportunity' or simply 'opportunities'?
Suggestion: an opportunity; opportunities
...r of newly graduated people do not have an opportunities to work in several economic fields whic...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...nd knowledge before joining job market. Also income or salary seems a significant de...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...persons are supposed to be challenging. However for better or worse any of us ought to ...
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Line 4, column 237, Rule ID: IN_STEAD_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'instead of'?
Suggestion: instead of
...ibute to the development of our society in stead of leaving solemn circumstances to be hand...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, well, as to, sort of, as a matter of fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12234042553 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94730293878 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593085106383 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1167101462 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.375 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146945904853 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459067712335 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0229880843489 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083868283924 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336576368674 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.