The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally.
What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?
Undoubtedly, in these days people are striving for becoming bilingual and multilingual. It is provided that the trend of visiting abroad countries would make a proficient language and people would not speak another language. While i believe that this phenomenon has some merits, there are some possible demerits that can not be overlooked.
On the one hand, using a single language by all nations around the world leads to distinctive advantages for individuals. Firstly, in this fast-paced world most of the people are immigrating to western countries in an effort to locate a lucrative jobs. Moreover, they encounter the problem of language barrier as english is spoken in almost all developed countries such as Canada, Australia. Therefore, if there would be only one language to speak, people do nor need to be worried about facing difficulties in communication. Secondly. It may build strong relationship among nations as they would have similar culture, linguistic ability and lifestyles. That is why, it is extremely important to have only one language in various countries. Most importantly, there would not be any restrictions to emigrant from one nation to another.
On the other hand, several potential downsides are brought by this prevailing trend. First of all, language is the national identity of a person as way of making conversations indicates the nationality and origin of people. So, communicating vis single language would loose the uniqueness of the country. In addition to this, there are variety and diversity of languages in all parts of planet as millions of languages are spoken by masses. As a result, it enhances the beauty of world by exposing to divergent cultures and traditions. Also, without varied languages and customs, citizens on one country will not have vested interest in other cultural activities without variety.
To conclude, although i believe that many negative effects are attached to speaking one language, some benefits can not be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in addition, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32594936709 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94506361486 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575949367089 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.0474480473 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5882352941 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346164042092 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975300788012 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500493147923 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177175502775 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810820100491 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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