With the rise of media, we can observe that advertising is absolutely pervasive, especially in how it convinces consumers to buy goods. On the other hand, some people admit that it hardly draws their attention due to its prevalence. From my perspective, while many people turn a blind eye to advertising, it still can attract people to buy products.
On the one hand, the ignorance on those advertisements can be explained by how they mislead people. Many companies nowadays have a tendency to exaggerate the function of the product they advertise or use the celebrity’s endorsement to introduce them. And when consumers find out that it is not high-quality enough or harmful to their health, they will ignore them immediately.
On the other hand, I still believe that advertising is still successful in persuading people to buy the products. The widespread use of online advertisements can be used to explain this situation. People can easily encounter ads by getting access to social networking sites. Take Tik Tok, a streaming video service, as an example. People may face up to many short ads while scrolling down the website which provide one-of-a-kind promotions or simple methods of payment. Then people might assume that these products will be perfectly substituted for their current goods at home, or they are in the absence of these goods. As a result, they take a snap decision on buying them.
To conclude, although buyers have enhanced their awareness of buying behavior, the marketing department will still take action to attract people who don’t have enough awareness of how to wisely use their budgets.
- Some people think that everyone has the right to have access to university education and that government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Some students prefer to take a gap year and between high school university to work or to travel Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 89
- Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as unsatifactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- Some people think that everyone has the right to have access to university education and that government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 214, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ess of how to wisely use their budgets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so, still, then, while, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89011446196 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59022556391 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3165974457 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7142857143 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207754821378 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741037262327 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611074372334 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123496037375 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748728128145 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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