“Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals.”
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many people argue, whether wild animals should be in the jungle or protected in zoos. This essay will discuss both views about, whether if animals should preserved in cages nor left in the jungles. As far as I am concerned, animals should be liberated in their natural state and undoubtedly zoos should be shut down.
Nevertheless, majority of people consider zoos by some means to be beneficial. First of all, zoos help in preserving endangered animals by keeping them safe from environmental and humans’ threats, as habitat destruction and the spread of urbanization. There are breeding programs administrated by zoos to raise the numbers of endangered species and avoid them from becoming extinct. Secondly, people can learn and understand more about them, by keeping animals in zoos, this also can help in raising awareness amongst public in order to help maintaining several species from extinction.
On the other hand, while the abovementioned may be true to a some extent, zoos are not necessarily for animals safety, but more likely of an economical fraud. Poaching endangered animals and keeping them in zoos, will encourage people to buy expensive zoo tickets to come catch sight of these rare animals, which will ironically reflect on the economical income. To add up, zoos can only hold a small capacity of animals unlike nature, as a result they cannot prevent the habitats from being destroyed. I believe that this responsibility lays on the shoulder of government to create funding programs in order to stop the destruction of habitats of endangered species, so that these animals can live their natural state rather than being looked up in cages. Furthermore, mostly in zoos animals are mistreated and tortured, without enough food supply and medical care, not to mention that annually there are insignificant numbers of animals in zoos die from starvation and diseases.
To conclude, despite that some zoos have positive impacts on protecting some endangered species, all-inclusive, I believe they are cruel places for these compassionate creatures and cause them nothing but harm.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24925816024 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.845612237 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563798219585 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.2548855997 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.076923077 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9230769231 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379475086558 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144326351216 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694511672848 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229237396891 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830195647072 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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