In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but other think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Currently, there is a phenomenon in some countries that a few percentages take possession of a great share of society’s wealth. Although it is argued such development is beneficial to a country, others believe a maximun wage should be imposed by governments. However, such imposition could effect negative consequences for businesses as high salary is the main attraction of any profitable company.
First and foremost, high remuneration is inherently the key consideration for any talented worker, when applying for a position. Obviously, highly competent employees are the decisive factor in enhancing a business’s competitiveness, as they are able to devise profoundly sound plans or generate ideas, which could be manifested into marketable products. This can be seen in Google where graduates with high qualifications are paid with higher salaries than the average to invent functional applications. Such decision has enabled the company to maintain their leading position in the digital market.
Furthermore, it should be of note that an individual income is commensurate with knowledge and competence. Were a well-qualified employee not to be rewarded with well-deserved benefits and pay raises, it is highly likely the establishment would be impacted by high turnover. Moreover, employees who could not feel their efforts would be remunerated appropriately will be demotivated to contribute more. In combination, these consequences mean the overall productivity of a company will be deteriorated alarmingly. Therefore, instead of introducing a limit on maximum salaries, minimum wages should be raised in accordance with inflation, which could minimize the pay gap between senior executives and low-level workers and in turn, sustain decent living standards.
In conclusion, for a business to survive in an ever-competitive market, it is critically essential to retain capable workforce with competitive salaries, and simultaneously, increasing minimun wages could mitigate not only productivity loss but also inflation effects on employees.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...turn, sustain decent living standards. In conclusion, for a business to survive...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84768211921 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43812748199 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658940397351 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3780560777 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.846153846 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106656050635 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039212380374 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032211065098 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0689676870537 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050196595177 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.75 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.95 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.26 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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