Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Typically, languages are a part of their own cultures and having them died out every year is catastrophic. Some people think that a single language should be considered as the main language that the people of a society work with but existing several languages in a society has nothing to do with the difficulty of living. In this essay I disagree with some people who think there should be several languages in a society.
Languages are hard to learn and many times can put a barrier between some groups of a society. The main reason why people think one or more than one languages will make life difficult is that learning a language is very hard and need a large level of energy and attention and it takes a lot of time. For instance I live in iran and I tried to learn Portuguese and it was so hard because there are a lot of words and grammars and instructions about the structure of sentences to learn.this example is also true about learning English.
Sometimes people show a radical approach to a new or foreign language and start opposing that because they see that language as not one of theirs or maybe they believe if just a single language exists their national power and sovereignty will be strengthened or maintained. For instance if several parts of a country start to use their own languages the rest of that country feel the main language has been ignored and try to supplant or eradicate those languages. For example if several languages are supposed to be available at school or universities or educational institutes it would be very troublesome for teachers to manage their classes and educating the students.
In conclusion, one language can make a country more united and prosperous. So that, it is better for everyone to use and exert a single language.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 146, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one language', 'a language', or simply 'languages'?
Suggestion: one language; a language; languages
...eason why people think one or more than one languages will make life difficult is that learni...
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Line 3, column 674, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eir classes and educating the students. In conclusion, one language can make a c...
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Line 4, column 147, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...one to use and exert a single language.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71474358974 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7037740413 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.1155458467 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.727272727 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3636363636 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341359480579 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138552067626 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110891125326 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196618870086 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150262375076 0.056905535591 264% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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