Bullying is a big problem in many schools
What do you think are the causes of this? What solution can you suggest?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There are many problems which are existing in many schools and one of the big problems is bullying. I believe that there are many causes leading to this issue, and I will give some solutions to solve these in the essay below.
Some reasons cause the bully's actions in school. Firstly, Children living in a violent environment will tend to bully. For example, children living in a place that usually has fights and someplace has a high rate of the offender will learn violent actions from those, and they will use these actions to show their power. Secondly, racial discrimination is also one of these reasons. In some schools, a division based on the color of skin still exists and there are some bad concepts about people who have different color skin. As a result, the adverse in school will strainer and lead to some violent things. Thirdly, suffering mental traumas can make children put abusive actions on others. Some experts said that children who have mental trauma often hurt other people to relieve their anger and to prove that they are not weak or useless.
Bullying can be solved by different solutions. One of them is teaching students to know more about bullying in school. Schools can give some lessons about the consequences of bullying. From that, students will truly know about bullying. At the same time, schools also have to strictly punish students who have violent actions. With strict fines, another student will not have bullying anyone.
In conclusion, bullying is caused for many reasons, and I believe that this issue will be solved by alternative ways to stop bullying.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91176470588 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34930785655 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533088235294 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9886292072 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5882352941 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146017129912 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589301627708 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574723433089 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117908957516 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565609534127 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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