The education of young people is highly prioritized in many countries. However, educating adults who cannot write or read is even more important and governments should spend more money on this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Education is the backbone of any society which is compulsory for everyone. However, there are predominantly two contrasting views where a section of society vehemently deems that study for youngsters should be given more importance while others emphasize that it should be prioritize for adults too. And, I partially concur with this kind of notion.
On the one side, younglings are the future of any nation and they need proper schooling. Many adolescents are unable to get basic learning due to lack of money. Additionally, many countries do not have a good infrastructure and quality teachers. Therefore, Ministry are utilizing their funds on expanding these facilities. As a result, more children can get better study because a county's success is determined by quality learning. For instance, Japan has always been known for its magical technological inventions due to providing proper means of schooling to its youngsters. Consequently, Japanese have always been on top in the industry due to their advanced technological inventions which has given beneficial contribution not only to their country but also to all over the world.
On the other side, adult literacy is significantly important because they are responsible for the betterment of society in many ways. Firstly, illiteracy means to unemployment and increase in crime rate of the country. if individuals in a particular region are uneducated and not being to earn their bread and butter, different kinds of crimes in the form of robberies will occur such as bank robbery, chain snatching, shop lifters and many more. Hence, government should provide some vocational training courses to all the illiterate adults in the society so that everyone is a fruitful for building a society and nation altogether.
To conclude, literacy is a pillar of any successful country. Thus, juveniles as well as adults both are important to be educated to build a great and strong nation together.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 274, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'prioritized'?
Suggestion: prioritized
...hile others emphasize that it should be prioritize for adults too. And, I partially concur...
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Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
... increase in crime rate of the country. if individuals in a particular region are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28617363344 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99728477947 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604501607717 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0139732629 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.75 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162997794058 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472180708923 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402530797779 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988232617979 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026200067859 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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