Some people think young people should be free to choose the job that they want,
while others believe that they should be realistic and think about their future. Discuss both
views and give your own opinion.
There are many important factors involved when it comes to choosing a job. While some people believe that considering the reality and the future is better, I agree that it is young people’s freedom to choose whatever they desire to do.
The argument in favor of choosing jobs they want would be that they exalt the importance of job satisfaction. As when they find a sense of enjoyment at the workplace, they are more likely to have more inspiration and motivation at work. So people will dedicate themselves to work and be able to overcome challenges they have to face. Another reason is that the world of work is not predictable. Due to the development of technology, some work that remained nowadays can be eradicated in the future. Consequently, it is difficult for young people to find a job that is good for their future.
On the other hand, there are strong reasons why job seekers should be realistic. First of all, it is true that many youngsters are not able to find their contentment in any work they do or they lack career ambitions. Therefore, they need to seek a job that can bring them a high quality of life rather than struggling to find their loved job. Furthermore, they might have unrealistic dreams of owning a glamorous career such as celebrities, and sports stars without particular goals to reach their dreams. As a result, they do not have a stable career and might face financial difficulty because of their immature thinking.
In conclusion, although young people may face difficulty when choosing their own career, I believe they should be free to choose their dreamt jobs at unpredictable times.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84420289855 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75021480515 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532608695652 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6216429891 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387567559467 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136589323819 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0966672162482 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269023194702 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609727358985 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.