We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help. So we should only be concerned with our own Communities and countries. To what extent do You agree or disagree with this statement.
Some people say that helping every person around the globe who is in need of help is a mountainous work. In other words it is almost impossible.I disagree with the statement and believe that we should reach out to people not only of our country but also worldwide.
There are plenty of benefits of helping the poor. Firstly, reaching out to the people that requires help will open door of many possibilities.The unprivileged people will get a chance to prove their worth and can live a better life. For example, if we offer homeless person a job, he or she will be able to move to a shelter and can lead a life much better compared to the past. Another benefit is that helping people worldwide will spread positivities and thus, people of other countries will come forward to help. As a result, the task of helping others will become a lot easier. Moreover, if we spread kindness towards other, the world would be a more peaceful place to Live in. The crime rate will go down. Wars would not happen. And that is why helping helpless people globally is extremely important.
On the contrary, if we only stay focused on our own people and country, it will be a sign of selfishness, and the impact of the outcome will be less fruitful than that of reaching out to as many people as possible globally. However, it may be somewhat beneficial for our community but the less privileged country will be still suffering and will undergo problems like illiteracy, poverty and many more. Not to mention, many deadly diseases will start to spread all over the world. For example, ebola virus spread originally from Africa and many people died because they did not had the cure for it. Research say that many more diseases likely to Spread in near future unless they improve their lifestyle. And which is near to impossible if the people of all class does not come forward. And for the betterment as a whole, it is much necessary to help these people.
In conclusion, although it may seem hard to reach out to the needy people worldwide, and we may find it easy to focus solely on our own community people, I believe the outcome of spreading kind hand towards as many people as possible will be much more fruitful as well as advantages. And the task will be alot easier if people like us step up.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 7.85571142285 293% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1882.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57907542579 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4730801219 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503649635036 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9396643046 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.55 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202698740723 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683218954958 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622680722766 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156956989877 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080019268683 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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