Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy ? What other things in life can make people happy ?
Money is considered by many people to be one of the most important contributing factors toward happiness. However, while I agree that money is definitely one factor in how happiness people are with their lives, I also think that other aspects of life can play a more vital role in creating happiness.
On the one hand, most people claim that money plays a vital role in their life because of several reasons. The main reason is that they will satisfy their basic needs and do not worry about price if they have a lot of money. For example, paying for house maintenance is the common budget that people have to pay. Moreover, there is some problem that many individuals have to face up with, so they don’t overcome these issues because of having less money. Take treat cancer as a particular example. It is the common problem that makes most families find difficult to overcome.
However, despite the influence of money, I believe that other factors make people feel happier. Firstly, family is the primary feature forming the whole society, so it will be hard to imagine how to survive if they don’t live with their parents. According to a recent study, some children who live in a family without a mother or father tend to become criminals in the future. In addition, freedom is the thing that some people want to reach with , which means that they not only do everything but also take the responsibility for themselves. For instance, the independence of finance is a common trend that some young dwellers want to do.
To conclude, several factors dictate how happy a person is in life, but money is only one of them. In fact, I would agree that family and freedom are both more important than budget alone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70431893688 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41377782881 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548172757475 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9269549246 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349354270509 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102796014053 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770972437181 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198432351375 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054973757804 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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