Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of some plants and animals, others say that there are other environmental problems.
Discuss these views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, the argument about the environmental issue is presented by two groups of people, some of them think that the main cause is the shortage of some types of plants and animals, others suggest that there are another conditions such as the pollution with its types. In my opinion, the lacking of plants effect negatively on the environment, but also there are many causes should be put in the consideration.
On the one hand, it is benefit to observe the green area surroundings us, because the clearance of the air will be reflected on our inhalation. Obviously, plants play a vital rule through the photosynthesis, by absorbing the Carbon dioxide and releasing the Oxygen they will clean up the atmosphere as well. More ever, the elimination of insects which feed mainly on plants via some kinds of animals, will appear the importance of these animals for the maintenance of our habitat.
On the other hand, the pollution with its types for instance, burning of hazardous wastes will produce toxic gaseous into the atmosphere. Another reason, the throwing of the organic wastes from industries in the river, will affect negative the aquatic organisms. Furthermore, the agricultural runoff contains fertilizers which can upset the balance of nutrients in a lake or ocean. In my view, the presence of plants and animals perform effective role in the environment, but also there are complications pursue another circumstances.
In conclusion, plants and animals are essential for the improvement of the environment. It would be useful, if Humans made sure they attain the safety actions to their medium.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1679389313 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9240328231 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599236641221 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1550984071 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.090909091 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9090909091 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221342762285 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758952668813 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709469095534 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125334499299 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524242658554 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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