Pterosaurs
In the passage, the writer enumerates why pterosaurs are incapable of powered flight. Oppositely, the lecture explains that there is a great capability possibility that pterosaurs cancould power flight for some reasons.
To devastate the first reason in the passage, which is pterosaurs are were reptiles, the lecture states that pterosaurs have had hair. Nowadays, reptiles are all cold-blooded. So they won’t don’t have a quick metabolism, which leads to an obstacle in for powered flights. On the other hand, the lecture states that hairs were found on the skin of the pterosaurs, which provides evidence that pterosaurs are were warm-blooded animals, further knowing that they could had enough energy do powered flights.
The lecture also asserts that the passage is baseless to claim that pterosaurs have had a heavyweight. The size of the pterosaurs could not decide determine their weight. Although the size of the pterosaurs was gigantic, their bones were hollow. This means that the weight of the pterosaurs is was light. With their light body, the pterosaurs are were capable of powered flight.
After explaining the first two reasons are wrong, the lecture starts to deal with the last assumption of the passage. The passage claims that pterosaurs have had small and weak muscles. But the lecture explains that pterosaurs could walk fast because pterosaurs are like bats, which both walk on four legs. So pterosaurs are capable of powered flight.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... flight for some reasons. To devastate the first reason in the passage, which i...
^^
Line 2, column 76, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he passage, which is pterosaurs are were reptiles, the lecture states that pteros...
^^
Line 2, column 410, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...h provides evidence that pterosaurs are were warm-blooded animals, further knowing ...
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Line 2, column 452, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re warm-blooded animals, further knowing that they could had enough energy do pow...
^^
Line 2, column 470, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...imals, further knowing that they could had enough energy do powered flights. The...
^^^
Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: VBZ_VBD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
...means that the weight of the pterosaurs is was light. With their light body, the p...
^^
Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...ns that the weight of the pterosaurs is was light. With their light body, the ptero...
^^^
Line 3, column 348, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...th their light body, the pterosaurs are were capable of powered flight. After expl...
^^^^
Line 4, column 353, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erosaurs are capable of powered flight.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.4613686534 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1373.03311258 90% => OK
No of words: 234.0 270.72406181 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26923076923 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63285669946 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 145.348785872 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508547008547 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 366.3 419.366225166 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6359899172 49.2860985944 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2 110.228320801 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 21.698381199 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 7.06452816374 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.475838938611 0.272083759551 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.214314986837 0.0996497079465 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121616916618 0.0662205650399 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.337645475797 0.162205337803 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866481255 0.0443174109184 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.3589403974 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.8541721854 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.42419426049 88% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 63.6247240618 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... flight for some reasons. To devastate the first reason in the passage, which i...
^^
Line 2, column 76, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he passage, which is pterosaurs are were reptiles, the lecture states that pteros...
^^
Line 2, column 410, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...h provides evidence that pterosaurs are were warm-blooded animals, further knowing ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 452, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re warm-blooded animals, further knowing that they could had enough energy do pow...
^^
Line 2, column 470, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...imals, further knowing that they could had enough energy do powered flights. The...
^^^
Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: VBZ_VBD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
...means that the weight of the pterosaurs is was light. With their light body, the p...
^^
Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...ns that the weight of the pterosaurs is was light. With their light body, the ptero...
^^^
Line 3, column 348, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...th their light body, the pterosaurs are were capable of powered flight. After expl...
^^^^
Line 4, column 353, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erosaurs are capable of powered flight.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.4613686534 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1373.03311258 90% => OK
No of words: 234.0 270.72406181 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26923076923 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63285669946 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 145.348785872 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508547008547 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 366.3 419.366225166 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6359899172 49.2860985944 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2 110.228320801 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 21.698381199 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 7.06452816374 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.475838938611 0.272083759551 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.214314986837 0.0996497079465 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121616916618 0.0662205650399 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.337645475797 0.162205337803 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866481255 0.0443174109184 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.3589403974 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.8541721854 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.42419426049 88% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 63.6247240618 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.