The number of marriages and divorces in the UK from 1975 to 2000

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The number of marriages and divorces in the UK from 1975 to 2000.

The given line chart provides a comparison of the quantity of marriages and divorces in the UK during the period of 25 years from 1975 to 2000.
From an overall perspective, it is clear that the numbers of total marriages, 2nd marriages, and divorces saw an upward trend, whereas the reverse pattern could be observed in the figure for 1st marriages over the given period.
Looking at the chart in more detail, in 1975, the number of total marriages was 500 thousand. The number of 1st marriages was highest, at 350 thousand while the figure for 2nd marriages was significantly lower, at 150 thousand. However, the divorces accounted for the lowest number, at 100 thousand.
After reaching a peak of 650 thousand in 1985, the number of total marriages declined sharply to 580 thousand in 2000. The quantity of 1st marriages increased moderately to 400 thousand in 1985, after which this figure went down considerably to 300 thousand in 2000. A dramatic rise to 250 thousand was witnessed in the number of 2nd marriages from 1975 to 2000. There was also a steady rise to 250 thousand in the quantity of divorces.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.828125 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63921724474 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484375 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6949088122 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398580637384 0.215688989381 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189256629508 0.103423049105 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125984945957 0.0843802449381 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258975111658 0.15604864568 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0962297774215 0.0819641961636 117% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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