In modern society , some people argue that school become unnecessary as children can study at home via the Internet. Do you agree or disagree?
In contemporary society, hordes of people hold the view that school is further trivial on the grounds of the burgeoning of homeschooling through the internet. From my perspective, I totally dissent with this statement for the following reasons that will be unraveled in this essay.
On the one hand, it is not a stretch to say that school has played a crucial role in the evolution of humanity, which is considered to not be eliminated because of its conventionality. Moreover, there is no doubt that school is the cradle, originating a large number of whizz-kids and billionaires all around the world, with the qualification and dedication of a plethora of teachers. Besides, it provides kids with a dynamic environment that can both serve the physical and psychological sides. For example, when the descendants are enrolled in the school, they can have more acquaintances and strike up more friendships, which is a contributor to paving the way for them to go further in their careers.
On the other hand, it is an irrefutable fact that the internet is an inappropriate place for children, which is completely toxic for them to approach at an early age. Furthermore, there is a boom in the figures of individuals having weak eyesight in this day and age due to the negative effects of the internet. Additionally, when offspring are educated at home, it will not ensure adequate knowledge for them compared to the school, even students will easily lose their confidence and motivation when homeschooling alone. For instance, it is believed that when human's opponents are around a person, they have a tendency to finish the given task more productively than normal.
In summary, it is readily apparent that school has proven to be a reservoir of advantages, which can effectively advocate the children in the process of forming personality. In my point of view, kids should utilize the combination of school and homeschooling with their parent's permission to have a better study outcome.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... that school is the cradle, originating a large number of whizz-kids and billionaires all around ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in summary, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06990881459 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10535972535 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547112462006 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.7149755367 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.0 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4166666667 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131570066531 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469871768371 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317057288015 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808515139478 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180219962557 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.